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(Date Posted:08/24/2003 03:39:59)

I don't pretend that these are high art, but they are honest, and I guess that's what matters.----------"Confession"?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comHarbored safely in the back of my throat,the words you dreadthe words I now unchainSyllables that will cut you to the deepest partand shake what you need mostThis is my secret:I have been washed clean--Clean of the blood of the lambNo longer stained by that odious flowNo longer stifled by that heavy robein which you wrap yourself like a cocoonThis is my story:My eyes have been opened--the tinted glasses brokenand revealed in the brilliant light of knowledgethe myriad colors of the world,hideous and wonderfulThe lie fallen away as a clothfrom a Van GoghThese are my wordswhich I want most to formmore than hello or good-bye on my lipsthese wordswhich you will not understandwhich will drive you away,leaving me with my lonely rewards:a clear conscienceand a heavy heart
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(Date Posted:08/24/2003 03:40:00)

I don't pretend that these are high art, but they are honest, and I guess that's what matters.

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"Confession"

 

 

Harbored safely in the back of my throat,

the words you dread

the words I now unchain

Syllables that will cut you to the deepest part

and shake what you need most

 

This is my secret:

I have been washed clean--

Clean of the blood of the lamb

No longer stained by that odious flow

No longer stifled by that heavy robe

in which you wrap yourself like a cocoon

 

This is my story:

My eyes have been opened--

the tinted glasses broken

and revealed in the brilliant light of knowledge

the myriad colors of the world,

hideous and wonderful

The lie fallen away as a cloth

from a Van Gogh

 

These are my words

which I want most to form

more than hello or good-bye on my lips

these words

which you will not understand

which will drive you away,

leaving me with my lonely rewards:

 

a clear conscience

and a heavy heart

 

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(Date Posted:08/24/2003 03:43:32)

"Memorial"

 

 

On the first day of the week

we gather together to commemorate

the crucifixion of our minds

the piercing of the hands of compassion

the burial of our collective will,

wrapped in white bandages and buried

in the hollow cave of religious ecstasy

 

Nod and bow and mourn,

for the innocence of youth has been slain,

your humanity reduced to bleached bones from too much fasting.

Nothing now can save you from your God:

a jealous tyrant hungry for your flesh

 

What becomes of a man

who gains the whole of God? heaven

but forfeits his fleeting soul,

dying with a desperate hope for glory

and fear of hell

 

his entire life unlived

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(Date Posted:08/24/2003 03:47:20)

I believe I posted this one already, but I figured I'd put them all into one thread.

 

 

"To a Saint"

 

 

Do not deny me this body -

expression of fire divine

and carnal,

heated with the yearning

of grains toward sun

and waves pulled inexplicably

by the white moon

 

I will not wear this hair shirt

which you offer in fellowship

I do not desire sainthood

or the denial that cleans the spirit

of its muscles, skin, that wetness on the lips

from loving C

and yet you would become a dusty bone,

flesh and wanting

all martyred to a dying cause.

 

I Am this form, all of it:

blood, sweat, hunger, pleasure, pain

I Am not to be cleft

my nature inseparable from my soul

your thorns not my thorns

your flesh like a dead man's:

ashen

consumed by an all-consuming fire.

 

I claim this Body:

it is mine

and you cannot take it from me.

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(Date Posted:03/05/2005 16:15:46)

Reply to : Blue_Fox
Your poems are brilliant! Keep up the good work

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Yes I AM too cool for church! Jesus is NOT waaay cool I AM! Am I"m real and he"s NOT SO...!

I used to be into Jesus
But now I"ve kicked the habit
Now I have REALLY seen "the light" and know the REAL truth and the Truth - not the lie of christianity! - has set me free!

"..When you"re inside the pig, it"s so warm and comfortable and feels wonderful. Then you get out and you realise the hideous monster that"s been accomodating you!" (From a book, talking about during and after bad relationships but SO appropriate here too!)

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