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(Date Posted:08/24/2003 05:39:59)

I don't pretend that these are high art, but they are honest, and I guess that's what matters.----------"Confession"?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comHarbored safely in the back of my throat,the words you dreadthe words I now unchainSyllables that will cut you to the deepest partand shake what you need mostThis is my secret:I have been washed clean--Clean of the blood of the lambNo longer stained by that odious flowNo longer stifled by that heavy robein which you wrap yourself like a cocoonThis is my story:My eyes have been opened--the tinted glasses brokenand revealed in the brilliant light of knowledgethe myriad colors of the world,hideous and wonderfulThe lie fallen away as a clothfrom a Van GoghThese are my wordswhich I want most to formmore than hello or good-bye on my lipsthese wordswhich you will not understandwhich will drive you away,leaving me with my lonely rewards:a clear conscienceand a heavy heart
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I don't pretend that these are high art, but they are honest, and I guess that's what matters.


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"Confession"


 


 


Harbored safely in the back of my throat,


the words you dread


the words I now unchain


Syllables that will cut you to the deepest part


and shake what you need most


 


This is my secret:


I have been washed clean--


Clean of the blood of the lamb


No longer stained by that odious flow


No longer stifled by that heavy robe


in which you wrap yourself like a cocoon


 


This is my story:


My eyes have been opened--


the tinted glasses broken


and revealed in the brilliant light of knowledge


the myriad colors of the world,


hideous and wonderful


The lie fallen away as a cloth


from a Van Gogh


 


These are my words


which I want most to form


more than hello or good-bye on my lips


these words


which you will not understand


which will drive you away,


leaving me with my lonely rewards:


 


a clear conscience


and a heavy heart


 

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(Date Posted:08/24/2003 05:43:32)

"Memorial"


 


 


On the first day of the week


we gather together to commemorate


the crucifixion of our minds


the piercing of the hands of compassion


the burial of our collective will,


wrapped in white bandages and buried


in the hollow cave of religious ecstasy


 


Nod and bow and mourn,


for the innocence of youth has been slain,


your humanity reduced to bleached bones from too much fasting.


Nothing now can save you from your God:


a jealous tyrant hungry for your flesh


 


What becomes of a man


who gains the whole of God? heaven


but forfeits his fleeting soul,


dying with a desperate hope for glory


and fear of hell


 


his entire life unlived

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(Date Posted:08/24/2003 05:47:20)

I believe I posted this one already, but I figured I'd put them all into one thread.


 


 


"To a Saint"


 


 


Do not deny me this body -


expression of fire divine


and carnal,


heated with the yearning


of grains toward sun


and waves pulled inexplicably


by the white moon


 


I will not wear this hair shirt


which you offer in fellowship


I do not desire sainthood


or the denial that cleans the spirit


of its muscles, skin, that wetness on the lips


from loving C


and yet you would become a dusty bone,


flesh and wanting


all martyred to a dying cause.


 


I Am this form, all of it:


blood, sweat, hunger, pleasure, pain


I Am not to be cleft


my nature inseparable from my soul


your thorns not my thorns


your flesh like a dead man's:


ashen


consumed by an all-consuming fire.


 


I claim this Body:


it is mine


and you cannot take it from me.

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(Date Posted:03/05/2005 18:15:46)

Reply to : Blue_Fox
Your poems are brilliant! Keep up the good work

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I used to be into Jesus

But now I"ve kicked the habit

Now I have REALLY seen "the light" and know the REAL truth and the Truth - not the lie of christianity! - has set me free!



"..When you"re inside the pig, it"s so warm and comfortable and feels wonderful. Then you get out and you realise the hideous monster that"s been accomodating you!" (From a book, talking about during and after bad relationships but SO appropriate here too!)

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